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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-07-10 01:39 PM

Hearing an echo force answering the sea
Idly floating with mermaid green…hair
Alarming beauty, lips of chamomile
Foaming foundation thickening blues lucent
Bringing things remembered…shouldered…prudent
Seen…her actions brewing
Hearth and powders from her womb saline
Leaning this way and that…in-between worlds
Surrounding me encircled….
Her gallery lit with copper gusting sandstones
Through her doorways, water pours
Swirling hues and colors, prose dripping from her tongue
Marvel her embroidering of change pertinent and sung
Like a million flutes orchestrating a lover’s warm arms
Her plumage breathes impetuous thoughts
All gathered at her feet, as afternoon keeps impulsive watch
Her aspiration reveals a dream…
Where ornamental jewels of things unseen are
Wearing next to nothing except an albatross
Soaring above her emerald swells of mountainous waves
Where in lies the expertise of God’s own craft
Wetted cloths and blistered hands
Numbered sleepless nights, distinction breathing in my soul
Living with seas and ocean deep, my journey…
Such beauteous touching crystalline waves,
On a canvas flooding continents, carving life
With quiet smiles, perfect in His greatest art
I therein am counterpart…..
Now you know the whole story.

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

1 posted 2003-07-10 01:42 PM

Very nicely writ. So well that I actually had to think what a couple words meant. nice job. not many people can do that to me.

Sometimes you can't change what's going to happen but you can change how you percieve it.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-07-10 01:46 PM

Amazingly beautiful!
Very very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-07-10 01:52 PM

Very, very nice. Enjoyed. Chris

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-07-10 04:26 PM

quote:
Her aspiration reveals a dream…
Where ornamental jewels of things unseen are
Wearing next to nothing except an albatross
Soaring above her emerald swells of mountainous waves

Wow, this is great imagery, Lee. I love the way you've captured a magestic moment at sea!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-07-10 04:42 PM

Applause!
Well done. TD

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

6 posted 2003-07-10 04:43 PM

*clapping really loud for you*
Woa.

This blew me away. I was sort of able to relate to the poem.
super job. keep on posting.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-07-11 12:44 PM

Thanks very much to all of you...I do so enjoy the sea/oceans....so marvelously full of all emotions, teaching much about nature...contributing the the necessary essense of life, without it we would die...
Been so drawn to the water since a little child...like a magnet stuck to a refrigerator. Smiles and hugs, sending good wishes for peace and love to you all.

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