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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-07-10 08:38 AM

“THIS PICTURE POSE”

I see tenderness fair with eyes of mine,
one to embrace of skin that’s fair,
silk to sooth with fingertips to caress,
shoulders soft, I would touch them bare…

Petals of a rose I give to you of grace,
from a heart that beats from deep within,
only to see one smile would be enough,
for sadness reigns of where I’ve been…

So I sit and dream thoughts of thoughts,
of lips to melt with desires that flow,
I speak of words to be with whispers soft,
for of you I gaze in this picture pose…
~~~~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-07-10 08:47 AM

Very romantic write, Bill..

believe in what your heart feels...

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

2 posted 2003-07-10 08:48 AM

And with last word of this verse...I release a thousand sighs. Oh Bill, this is so beautiful.

Patricia

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-07-10 09:13 AM

Oh Bill...you're writing just keeps on getting better and better.
Beautiful and romantic.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-07-10 09:19 AM

Bill,
If this don't get them nothing will, enjoyed

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-07-10 09:24 AM

Bill:

may she grace you soon and fall upon your embrace to break this pose of yours . . .
xxoo

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

6 posted 2003-07-10 09:30 AM

Lovely poem. I see many lines in this one that could lead to another poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Bon-Bon

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

7 posted 2003-07-10 09:33 AM

wonderful poem. It remindes me of taking pictures. I like the different view point. I hope to read more of your work.
Keep up the great work.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-07-10 10:18 AM

Beautiful my friend. hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

9 posted 2003-07-10 10:33 AM

An eternal romantic...
much needed in this world
gone rife with strife

well done, Sir

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-07-10 10:57 AM

nice write,,, enjoyed reading...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2003-07-10 11:03 AM

simply beautiful

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-07-10 11:38 AM

"sadness reigns of where I've been..."

~ May your sadness give way to gladness.

Luvin' hugs,
EA

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

13 posted 2003-07-10 12:12 PM

good write Bill

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

14 posted 2003-07-10 12:29 PM

Where would one find a kind hearted soul like you? Are you the one in a million? Ah lovely, lovely setiments Bill, she's a lucky lady.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-07-10 01:06 PM

beautiful writing once again

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2003-07-10 02:14 PM

nice write

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

17 posted 2003-07-10 07:17 PM

Bill...This is an amazing write!!! Shows the tender, thoughtful you. I love the images you paint...I can almost see this lady of grace smiling down at you. Wonderful writing, as usual. ***Ivy Rose

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

18 posted 2003-07-10 07:31 PM

she sounds like a dream come true......do these women exist, i wonder

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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

19 posted 2003-07-10 07:41 PM

Beautiful, as always, Bill...such a romantic you are.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

20 posted 2003-07-10 07:41 PM

BC, I loved each verse, line and word.
Petals of a rose I give to you of grace,
from a heart that beats from deep within,
Just fabulous!

I know I've told you a gazillion times, but you are definitely the master of romance.

Huggles, Marti

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

21 posted 2003-07-10 08:09 PM

Bill...Your classic style. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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