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Monkeyluv74
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since 2003-06-07
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0 posted 2003-07-11 06:06 PM

Too Much

Happiness is held within his touch, his lips, and his words
While we were together i was in my own heaven
happiness was all i knew
He was going to be mine forever
But me never wanting to let go of him
Forced him to let go of me

Now i don't have his hand gently caressing my leg
Or his warm lips tracing the lines of my body
Or his soft whispers in my ear
Who ever knew loving someone so much
Would make them turn away?
© Copyright 2003 Melissa - All Rights Reserved
zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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1 posted 2003-07-11 06:09 PM

Your second write I read, and i allready adore ur writings
kelly
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-07-19 08:55 AM

Enjoyed...I suppose your talking about smothering...James
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3 posted 2003-07-19 09:10 AM

Melissa, this is a pretty poem, even if
it is kind of sad.
Hugs to you  
Ethel
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