Open Poetry #27 |
Rose of love |
zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Within our love a rose resides It breaths the air our hearts confide This rose, the back of true concern makes my soul for your one yearn Clumsy first kiss grew to more, feels matured in times decor, Struggles and anguish made thorny scenes leading to tranquil peace, serene beauty recovered once again, lovers embrace equal lifes best cocaine, hand in hand walking along the highway of love, facing hidden future together * [im not that good with html and such alike, so lets hope this figure is somewhat ok, it's supposed to be a rose :p] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It may not have graphically come across as a rose, but poetically it certainly did! Warm hugs, EA |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful write |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
sweet on me..thanks. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a rose indeed. keep up the good work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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