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Open Poetry #27

The Candle and the Moth

anwaarhassan
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since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

0 posted 2003-07-09 08:48 PM

The Candle And The Moth

In aimless flight, on forlorn treks,
Thought and deed…mindless wrecks
Chanced I upon thy gentle light
In breathless wonder … silent delight.

Heart ‘aflutter, mind insane,
No heed of fear or thought of pain;
Oh! silent beacon of the night,
Beckons me, thy glorious light.

That you and I be one and same
So burns the need to match thy flame
Cease thy tears for this fate of mine
Lest thou perish before my time.

[This message has been edited by anwaarhassan (07-11-2003 09:50 AM).]

Poe_Pot_Pie
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

1 posted 2003-07-09 08:51 PM

Very deep, dude!! That was the best, EVER!!! I hope to see more of you! you can check out my poem, if you like. HINT HINT

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-07-09 08:52 PM

Beautifully written, with great gentleness.

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

3 posted 2003-07-09 09:07 PM

Midnitesun & Poe_Pot,
Thank you for your comments...appreciate you taking the time to read my poem

Anwaar.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-07-09 11:22 PM

I think I can speak for many
who will be enjoying your poetry,
Anwaar.

Thank you.

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

5 posted 2003-07-12 08:42 AM

Sunshine
thank you for the comments...I know that I have already enjoyed reading the works of many talented poets at this website...

Anwaar

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