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Open Poetry #27

Is it time yet?

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-09 08:15 PM

Watch you
smell
jars full of
jasmine, tipping
me over and
spilling
me out.
Like a dream,
swiftly
glazing my feet over
the clouds.
Tickle,
like feathers.
I'm creeping,
witching hour
keeps ticking.
And I,
like magic slip
through the night
to find you,
sleeping.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-07-09 11:29 PM

I enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

2 posted 2003-07-09 11:52 PM

I usually don't like constant line breaks like you've used here, but you've put them to good use. I enjoyed reading this.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-07-10 06:40 AM

slipping thru the night is where i find him too,
good thoughts

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