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Open Poetry #27
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
0 posted 2003-07-09 07:51 PM

Perusal of your image
An aquifer cupped deep
Drawn water for my thirsting
Eyes
Rain upon my garden
Given drink to blossoms
Wept in waiting
Could I gather of the
Dewdrops
To return with golden nectar
The sweet of visions
Recalled full bloom
As obligatory silence
Weighs the air and
Waterfalls conclude
To showers
I exhale you

Copyright Kkh 7/9/03
© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-07-09 07:54 PM

*smile*
now here is a twist on things indeed
Awesome Kathleen
xxoo
Soleil Noir
Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
2 posted 2003-07-10 10:38 AM


I do believe
you had me
holding my breath
until the end.

Lovely writing, this.
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