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Open Poetry #27

Just Another Day

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2003-06-13 10:20 PM

"Please can I have a dollar Miss?"
He threw his life away
Beer bottles smashed in the street
Too drunk to throw em away
Night sirens kick into gear
Here comes a long night
Business man brushes gangster
Here comes another fight
Walkin down the city streets
With bright street lights
Can I get away?
Can`t stand one more day
Always just another day

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-13 10:24 PM

Cool subject, great read/write!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-13 10:50 PM

Awesome poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-14 05:11 AM

depressing

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2003-06-14 11:10 AM

Thanks a bunch for replying u guys. I appriciate all of the feedback I get. (even if it`s just a little bit)
*ALLISON*

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

5 posted 2003-07-01 01:50 AM

hey,
this was really good.
so u moved from teen ey??
thas kool.
well i hope that you write more soon, cuz thia one was great!!!!
~Samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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