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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Where I belong (7/9/03ADV) I am not sure where I belong As the clocks revolutions Are not complete But I do know That meeting you Has made those revolutions Less important I learned before I met you That pain isn’t always a bad thing And that my time means something More than being angry at everything I have learned since meeting you That with the right person Things are so different And that I am better I still need to learn How to accept without fear And how to give without holding back But I know you will teach me I am not sure where I belong But I like the way it feels With you beside me |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I still need to learn How to accept without fear And how to give without holding back" Hard lessons to learn, easy to do once the skill is mastered. Good luck. Good write! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Icy! |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Awesome! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"And that my time means something More than being angry at everything" You nailed it on this one Susan. Took me forever to figure this out. Once I did, life is so, so sweet! Enjoyed the write!  [This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (07-16-2003 12:06 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
I can relate to that person that makes you better. In spite of yourself you live for that person...so everything around you must be better for them and likewise if they feel the same. It's a beautiful thing really. Lift eachother up....thanks for the read! |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The last three lines really touched me...james |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Well done, enjoyed. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you, everyone! Susan C. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very well expressed. And I can really relate to it. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
so brilliant I am in awe |
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