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Self-pity |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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Everyone must pour out their soul this no one denies but sometimes you start to believe your own lies Lies said to heal yourself instead cause more pain wake up from your nightmare and see that you alone are the one strangling yourself in the end Breathe the air in and out hold your breath no more stop the self torture and live once again cry tears of joy not of self-pity |
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wild irish Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 31 |
so right www.rateapoet.com |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i really need to take this advice |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
that you alone are the one strangling yourself in the end Breathe the air in and out hold your breath no more stop the self torture and live once again cry tears of joy not of self-pity Thomas, yes, so true. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
oh I am sorry I was thinking out loud again. LOL I repeat this poem to myself alot |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yep! That about sums it up!  Huggums, EA |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"stop the self torture" Ohhhhhhhh so so true. We usually torture ourselves more than anyone else can. Good write. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Breathe the air in and out hold your breath no more stop the self torture and live once again cry tears of joy not of self-pity Thomas, I need to print this poem out and look at it whenever I start having a pity-party.  Hugs  Ethel |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Lies said to heal yourself instead cause more pain wake up from your nightmare and see that you alone are the one strangling yourself in the end Wonderfuly, truth spoken words! Very much enjoyed! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Thomas: this is the most intelligent thing I have read all day brilliant xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Thomas! Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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