Open Poetry #27 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
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Left Unsaid
[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-09-2003 09:49 AM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Today is yet tomorrow's deeds when uttered loud in heard the presence of the past in thought of you in written word. Hi Maureen ![]() It's good to read you this morning. And this is an excellent write, as usual. ![]() Hugs Ethel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nakdthoughts, loved the "today is yet tommorrow's deeds" even though the rest of the poem gave me a sense of melancholy. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Maureen, This is so lovely. So glad I stopped by to see you! Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen: you know, I feel like this when I read my journals . . .EXACTLY Yep, *shaking head* awesome job xxoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite clever the wordplay you chose... As always deep and heartfelt. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thoughts to you the unsaid words in sharing that tense the past of blue very well written and felt over here too |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always enjoy your words M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ethel, thank you for stopping to read. I am beginning to bore myself with my own words. Kethry, melancholy is the right word. hugss nice to see you M Patricia thank you for doing so. littlewing, sometimes I guess words are better left unsaid although it doesn't make one understood any better. Thank you M ThisDiamond, *s thank you for noticing inkedgoddess, well I am in the blue most of the time,lately. Dixie, thank you hugs |
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