Open Poetry #27 |
Left Unsaid |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Left Unsaid
"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-09-2003 09:49 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Today is yet tomorrow's deeds when uttered loud in heard the presence of the past in thought of you in written word. Hi Maureen It's good to read you this morning. And this is an excellent write, as usual. Hugs Ethel |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nakdthoughts, loved the "today is yet tommorrow's deeds" even though the rest of the poem gave me a sense of melancholy. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Maureen, This is so lovely. So glad I stopped by to see you! Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen: you know, I feel like this when I read my journals . . .EXACTLY Yep, *shaking head* awesome job xxoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite clever the wordplay you chose... As always deep and heartfelt. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thoughts to you the unsaid words in sharing that tense the past of blue very well written and felt over here too |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always enjoy your words M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ethel, thank you for stopping to read. I am beginning to bore myself with my own words. Kethry, melancholy is the right word. hugss nice to see you M Patricia thank you for doing so. littlewing, sometimes I guess words are better left unsaid although it doesn't make one understood any better. Thank you M ThisDiamond, *s thank you for noticing inkedgoddess, well I am in the blue most of the time,lately. Dixie, thank you hugs |
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