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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-07-09 07:13 AM

Just The Morning

This is it,
just the morning for the gaze
into my soul,
because of foggy haze
laying low
across the land, white and gray
this is the morning
for the gaze.

There is always a
quiet reverie
come to my bones in such a way
as to not chill,
nor to scare away
any old ghosts, but come to play
in all the words
I want to say.

Gray now the morning, misty cool,
ah youth,
such a vigorous fool
and the tears,
would fill with rain
a pool
of the life in which I swam
though now gone,
for stronger, I am.

This is it, just the morning
for the gaze
into my soul, by and because
of foggy haze
laying low
across the land, white and gray
yes,
this is the morning
for the gaze.

Circa 3 May, 2000
Revised 9 June 2003
©KRJ

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2003-07-09 07:15 AM

this is the morning
for the gaze

... YES ...

regards, Karilea,
Sudhir

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-07-09 07:33 AM

Karilea this is gorgeous.

now i'm off to read this again...

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-07-09 07:53 AM

And a beautiful way to start my morning....thank you.
Eric

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-07-09 08:40 AM

Yes..a lovely way to start the day!
Beautiful Karilea.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2003-07-09 08:41 AM

Beautiful!

believe in what your heart feels...

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

6 posted 2003-07-09 08:43 AM

Perfect!

Jason

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

7 posted 2003-07-09 08:50 AM

Thank you! I'm sure Chriswill love it to

Into the library it goes

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-09-2003 09:46 AM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

8 posted 2003-07-09 08:50 AM

and of corse I click the signature button and not the library one.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-07-09 09:45 AM

Oh my..Karilea...what a beautiful surprise! Thankyou so much. Gave me the shivers it did. That's a good thing.

hugs to you dear lady, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-07-09 09:48 AM

Every morning is the perfect morning to gaze upon your poetry, my Dear!

--and this poem proves my point!

Have a glorious day!
EA

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-07-09 09:50 AM

This is it, just the morning
for the gaze
into my soul, by and because
of foggy haze
laying low
across the land, white and gray
yes,
this is the morning
for the gaze.

Beautiful, Karilea.
I see that Chris and Liz love it, too.

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~ Heart hugs, Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-07-09 01:12 PM

how beautiful and uplifting....a wonderful present for these two lovely ladies

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

13 posted 2003-07-09 05:40 PM

this is the morning for perfect poetry and this is the poem to make the morning perfect.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 2003-07-09 06:05 PM

Karilea...Most lovely thoughts, like you!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

15 posted 2003-07-09 07:20 PM

I missed you this morning...on the go today. But I am here this evening and this is just lovely for two wonderful poets.

Patricia

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

16 posted 2003-07-09 07:50 PM

Karilea:

a beautiful gift from one amazing woman to two . . .
xxoo

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