Open Poetry #27 |
Midnight's Star... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Last night I walked in dark of woods when midnight’s breeze reached to the trees and opened up leaves’ canopy allowing me a star to see star bright, star’s light piercing heaven’s firmament resplendent, nay transcendent shone glory of the god’s extol. It was as if trees with night’s breeze had framed the night revealed night’s soul within the light of star so bright. Last night I walked in dark of woods last night I saw a star shine bright. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is just full of wonder and awe. Thank you Tim, for reminding me of that "quiet joy". Another treasure from your pen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tim! Free Verse. But rhyme in time with each loved line and I, sublime read all in chime.... Thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read PoetFriendTim... *~coco~* |
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rapturedmist Junior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 30USA |
that was lovely...I haven't looked at stars in a long while and I almost almost forgot what it was like, but this poem reminded me again. :smiles: Have a wonderful day. -RM |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh the stars of twilight, the twinkling glow of a million candles in the sky...perhaps God's reminder of the light which guides our hearts...lovely write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
when midnight’s breeze reached to the trees and opened up leaves’ canopy allowing me a star to see star bright, star’s light piercing heaven’s firmament How very lovely. *S* I like this so much. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That was a wonderful walk ... thank you! Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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