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Open Poetry #27

Then

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-08 01:35 PM

Behind every eye
fixed fondness
of all we've known
kicks to the surface

Hurling thru puddles
mind cries
eyes no longer see
for there is no surface.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (07-08-2003 01:43 PM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-08 01:43 PM

hey gemdrop, what's crackin? I think you are, my friend. You rule the darkness

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-07-08 01:59 PM

Don't you dare listen to Wind..you write beautifully!!! I like ;0)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-08 02:06 PM

God i feeeel this..arggggggggggggh..blah

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2003-07-08 02:16 PM

of course she does, that's a complement

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-07-08 02:28 PM

Thanks you guys. yes, i knew it was windy one.

Raph, you feel this one, because it was for you.

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

6 posted 2003-07-08 03:03 PM

lovely write, gemjop, i enjoyed it, like ur writing style

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