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The Sound and the Silence
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The Sound and the Silence |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Making sound now I cannot Nettle sting voice he can The ache of them makes unseen marks Stretch my elastic lived band of life Strung and released over, and over Making silence now his art Care for you breaks my skull. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
memory is grey, the sound of silence. It sounds like children crying and makes you feel forgotten shivers gem, shivers I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, If you can tell me something worth fighting for -coldplay [This message has been edited by Wind (07-08-2003 10:02 AM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
oh, I had this wierd dream last night and you were in it. You were visiting someone over here, and I asked you what England is like and you said you lived between England and Germany, so I asked you which one, and you said neither, in between. Then you told me that you didn't really live in euorope, you lived in "Kansas" ok, how weird is that? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ha ha. Weird! Thats odd, because you were randomly in one of my dreams once, as were a few others from here. no one particularly did or said anything, but you were all just there. So, sounds like I was trying to be mysterious! between england and germany eh? in the sea perhaps? i'm an old sea hag! i knew it.  how good is this? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hello darkness my old friend..no really he is a friend I look better in the dark! Awesome words gemdrop and between Liz's replies and yours it's good to see I'm not the only one who's gone completely insane  [This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-08-2003 11:06 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You can call me Toto if u like, seen as i come from Kansas. wasnt that to do with the wizard of oz? I do often resemble a dog, especially in the mornings. Raphael, i thought i told you to stop it. gemdrop, ah you lot make me laugh you do. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
the title did remind me of the "Simon &Garfunkel song , but I read this a couple of times ..... was the sound your heartstrings being played ?? Hope |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Hope, the person i write of played them once, but not anymore. i save my heartstrings for better things now. I'll have to check out the song, i don't know it. Thanks for your reply lady.  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so excellent.... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
 "Gemdrop" I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your poetry comes from an awesome depth...and insight that is incredibly creative...do you paint? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
gem, this truly is a gem! You're not only pretty, but you have brains behind those beautiful eyes!   EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gem: Making silence now his art grrrr I know . . . lmao at these replies and God you MUST listen to the entire album, not just sound of silence . . . go download old friends , christ - thats a good tune Awesome write as always gem , you make me smile you do - even in your sadness xxoo |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Simon and Garfunkle - Bridge Over Troubled Waters .... Cecilia "making love up in my bedroom" Thank you for these smiles Gem!! *S |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
OMG! I can so relate to this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Nettle sting voice he can" Ouch! I do know that kind of "sting." Oh, by the way ... I am originally from the land of Ahhhhhhhhh's, too, Kansas. Call me Dorothy ... "there's know place like home." Hahhaha! |
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