Open Poetry #27 |
Even If Only In Dream |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
It still lives I felt it yesterday it dawned with a vision of her and an embrace even if only in dream I swear in life or dream I've never felt as pure or whole as I in her arms even if only in dream I awoke to this world again the same dull ache of another day but today love still lives even if only in dream [This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-08-2003 08:19 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal Dreams and love are eternal enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Reminds me of a line from an old song... "If you are but a dream, I hope I never waken" Very very nicely written and much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
that was sweet and romantic. you know what I say about love have I done magenta yet? I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I awoke to this world again the same dull ache of another day but today love still lives even if only in dream" I know exactly how this feels be glad you got to hold her in your dreams, I've heard it said that when we dream like that, our souls are touching..... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Sy Thank you Nancy wish i was still sleeping too grin No Liz I think it's a new color grin Thanks Ericc Thanks SEA it was something else, rarely if ever dreamt anything as vivid |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
for real If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
ya made me lose my stomach with this one. like a punch in the guts. stunning king Ralph. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is beautiful, though achingly so with that typical Raph sting. I'm saving this...I know that you know I relate. *sighs we always torture ourselves huh? Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your dreams forever be as sweet as this... Warm hugs, EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is beautiful Raph . . . may she visit you often and may you sleep sweet peace *smile* Makes me happy to know you had a nice dream for once sweety even if we must awake to reality it will change, I know you disagree but it will . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-08-2003 01:57 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks kris Thanks GemDrop M' Melissa torture can be good..whips, oils handcuffs..oh you mean thatttttt torture..ah nevermind Linda rather not dream if i have to wake up from them Thanks Sue |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
today love still lives yes |
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