Open Poetry #27 |
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A Memorable Moment |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
It had been a dry and oppressively hot summer's day. As the fiery sun slipped out of sight in the horizon, a cooling breeze began to blow, reviving our spirits. My betrothed took my hand in his and led me from the verandah of the Victorian manor, down to the meandering river that ran through the glen. Reflected moonbeams danced on the dark swirling waters, transporting us to a world all our own. The night was full of comforting sounds, from the cries of a loon to a choir of singing crickets. The air was sweet with the mingling fragrances of wildflowers and hay from a nearby field. He then guided me to a copse of poplar trees by the water's edge and gently pulled me down upon the cool, soft grass. We lay there together enjoying the ambiance of a beautiful summer evening in the country. As the moon rose in the evening sky, there was a distinct change in the atmosphere. The air had cooled and now felt damp against our skin. He drew me into his strong arms and held me in a warm and loving embrace beneath a celestial blanket of twinkling stars, while sharing our hopes and our dreams. We were lost in a memorable moment in time ~and it was a moment we wished would never end. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-09-2003 08:05 AM).] |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Bravo! Wonderfully written. Where's the rest? ![]() quatro |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Beautiful! I love reading love story poems. ![]() ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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RavenEye Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29Ohio, USA |
Hi, This is a very beautifully expressed poem! RavenEye ![]() Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We were lost in a memorable moment in time ~and it was a moment we wished would never end. And in some ways... they don't... not as long as we have memories. *S* This is beautiful, EA... wishing you more of those moments! *S* |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a beautifully descriptive piece, Earth Angel. Ahhh, to be transported to this lovely moment through these words ... a wonderful read to start my day. Many thanks. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Fantastic....realy beautiful descriptive writing..... Thank you... Goldenrose. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Yes...very desriptive and very beautiful writing. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
quatro ~ It gives me a thrill that you would like to read more from my quill! ![]() Have a wonderful day! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
skyshine ~ Thank you, dear Elizabeth! That was a "beautiful" response to my poem! ![]() May your days & nights be filled with beautiful and memorable moments... Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
RavenEye ~ Hi! Great to make your acquaintance! Welcome to Passions! Thank you for the "beautifully expressed" reply! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Belle of the South ~ --& I wish for many memorable moments such as this for you as well! ![]() You deserve the best, Dear One! Loving hugs and a warm smile, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kit ~ That was so very kind of you to say! Your generous words add fuel to my passion for writing! ![]() ~ May you be making wonderful memories today for your tomorrows! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goldenrose ~ I enjoy reading descriptive writing, so it pleases me that you have described mine as such! Thank you! ![]() ~ May your days and nights be forever sweet! Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric ~ Music to my ears! ![]() ~ Have a glorious day! Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hey...I remember this "moment'...it was nice wasn't it?.....Nice write Angelic one.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe ~ --and how could you ever forget? It, indeed, was memorable! ![]() Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Linda, this is so beautiful, it made me cry, sweet friend, because I always have gorgeous dreams of my mystery dream girl and she is sooooooo beautiful and I see her golden heart shine like a dancing star and her tears of joy like sapphires glowing in the moonlight! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I wish you and your love true happiness forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
This is gorgeous. You took me away from my self for a while, to a snap shot of perfection. I saw everything and I came as close to feeling it as possible. ~DW~ |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Wow. This is beautiful. I could almost smell the night air. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ The girl of your dreams sounds like a real dream of a girl! She will appear when you least expect it! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
D'sWhisper ~ Hi, there, DW! Welcome to the home of Passionate Poets! I enjoyed reading your comments as much as you seem to have enjoyed reading my poem! Thank you! ![]() Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
MsSouthernOrchard ~ The scent of peaches filled my office as I wrote your name! ![]() It pleases me when a reader experiences my poetry! Thank you!--and welcome aboard! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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