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Her Smile 'n Wink (Thanks Sunshine, Suthern, and Jellybeans)
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Her Smile 'n Wink (Thanks Sunshine, Suthern, and Jellybeans) |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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For: Sunshine, Suthern, and Jellybeans Thanks for your words of faith, hope, and happiness. Here's to you: Her Smile 'n Wink Stumbling amongst summer’s weeds too long Moaning, groaning sad “pity me” song Itching ‘n scratching in knee high field Sour notes out of tune my only yield Searching for lyrics of solstice fair Musings comfort unfound in sky’s glare ‘Til morning’s warm rays, her smile ‘n wink Shouted c’mon girl, I got your link Then it clicked, poet guiding my way Verses dancing, prancing swan's ballet Humming in my ears soft summer sighs With syllables, sounds, I find I rise Stepping lightly through weeds' breathless sway Yielding easy my soul finds its way Dear journey I walk with poet friends Wonder if she knew when she clicked send? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I thought I'd finished here tonight... wasn't quite sure why I peeked back in... but dear lady... what a smile you've given to end my day... I thank you so much! *S* To know words touched is a poet's pay... This gift truly humbles me... and to be in such company? *S* I thank you... from a grateful heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Patricia! And dedicated to three of the nicest ladies here at Passions! They truly do inspire one to carry one... ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What an enchanting poem and just a lovely way to say you care to friends. I doubt that she knew this would happen when she pushed send, but I am sure she's glad it did. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Enjoyed the flow, nicely done. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've a da-DUM that I don't have... so free verse of flow is all you'll see but look what you've sparked, here in the blue... for everyone...and me! LOL... You having fun yet? |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write n read,,,, A voice of honesty |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia Lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is so lovely and warm. Just like the author. Eric |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh I just love this...and...I could just ditto suthern *she just loves it when I do..grin* but nope, this is gonna get a jb original *smile* am so glad you find inspiration in my words, and yep I know I am still quoting suthern lol, but yes, to know that your words touch another poet is a great feeling, I used to write about all the darkness in me, until I found the Light, and now I try to spread it *smile*...so happy to help you find some Sunshine  jb hugs |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Patricia, a very excellent start toward your rhyming goal. A couple of small meter bumps, but overall....Ya done good!!! Don't feel bad at all ... Even the great Sunshine fumbles with meter from time to time, and she will admit it... |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
Very cool, I like it. Keep up the good writing. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pat, your heart is as big as your talent---and you have BIG TALENT!  Loves and hugs to all four of you!  Linda |
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