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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Like the splitting ends of my own hair you have worn me and coloured me countless moods. I forgive you over the greying time that lays inches thick since you last saw me. Shall it be this then that causes me to tear you from my roots and rid you out of my head? [This message has been edited by gemjop (06-13-2003 07:47 PM).] |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Good Head is hard to write, and this is perfect. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Nice 'n Easy, my friend, no man is worth all of that! Don't rip out your hair. It's so pretty...as we both have about the same color. Patricia |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You had me with the title though my expectation was completely off base grins..um..anyway I was still taken by your words as I always am |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
that was incredible and your choice of wording was awesome, i loved it  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this. Veyr interesting write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! love it! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
nice. i like the title. Goldenrose. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Nice i like the title (well what male wouldnt lol) then you open it find its about hair not the other thing lol anyway nice read me bad lol my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
he he...*thinks about changing the title as not to lead to dissapointment* one day, if my muse really leaves me, i may write about , you know, but til then, i'll carry on being innocent.  thankyou for your replies, you all make me smile. lol at patricia's reply, nice n easy, oooh you should see my roots, not good, not good, i need some. hair dye that is.  much love, gem xxx |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Shall it be this then that causes me to tear you from my roots and rid you out of my head? Sometimes we wish it was that easy, don't we? LOL Hugs to, sweet Gemma  Ethel Mae (Pssttt!!! By the way, you have to be careful of what you say around here, sometimes. LOL It gets took the wrong way lots of times. LOL) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Oh oh, it looks like Miss Clairol has a new line - Mr. Clairol, and that ain't good. lol We men do have a tendency to be a bit, shall I say, capricious with our talents to stroke softly. It's really not our fault, yanno. If women were more like men, we'd all be weird, and then it wouldn't make any difference. See? I've given some words of wisdom. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma - ooh I have to be careful what I say now _ I am a mod here - ahaha that is funny - anyhow - these "men" grrrrr . . . shutting mouth now . . . To bring this subject in such a matter as greying roots- just amazes me you amaze me - would never have thought of using this take on it brilliant xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write,, enjoyed... QjQ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
back to the head of the class up u go its a bad hair day in nj, cant do a thing with it in this humidity, inches of roots, know the feeling right now, need to recharge again |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Maybe the better alternative is to simply grow that hair out and let it cover that thought like a pompadour; you never know when those past visions might come necessary to interpret! (sad sigh) This is very powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Make sure you don't hurt your head lol  ARCTIC WIND |
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