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lola_v
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0 posted 2003-06-13 06:45 PM



Poem: Realizing something important happening within that 1 minutes

The first day I saw him I felt no attraction.

As the days went by I got to know and understand him.

I thought I wouldn’t feel any attraction for him just another friend to hang out with.

My friend and I always talked to him and about him.

He barely knew my name,

But we got to know each other more from talking during class and on the computer.

When my friend left us for a little while, we got to know each other more and I started to like him.

It wasn’t just his brown eyes but it was how great of a person he was to everyone that gave him a chance to be a friend.

However just as soon as all of this took place he was already taken.

I knew I liked him but I wasn’t sure if he felt the same way about me.

Till we started flirting purposely and he told me later on that he did have feelings for me.

I know now that for a while he will be taken, not just by his girlfriend but by other girls just like me because that’s just how great he is




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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-06-13 07:16 PM


Welcome to Passions, Lola.  Realizing that things can "happen in a minute" is a large part of poetry.  We take the little things, and wax poetic.

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

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2 posted 2003-06-13 08:31 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Awwwwwwwwwww, and I'm sure Mike would love to have you as a friend forever and ever, I'm sorry that he is already taken but I know he wishes you great happiness and will be so happy when you find a special someone just like him! (smiles) This is a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, this is a beautiful unselfish way of thinking and Mile is blessed to have you as a friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Lola, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet Lola, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lola, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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3 posted 2003-06-14 05:21 AM


wow
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-06-14 12:00 PM


lola - Welcome to PIP!
you know isnt that how it always goes?

truthful write
nice
xxoo

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-06-14 04:13 PM


Enjoyed...James
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6 posted 2008-02-01 10:28 PM


Very Much Enjoyed


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