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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Breathless I didn’t see it coming wind lurking in the darkness sweetly kissing the curve of my cheek weightless fingers played with my hair stealing my breath making me tremble then again flew away no where bound "if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life" Unknown |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Make sure you keep open the windows of your soul, that way it can come and go easily. It will come to you anyway, best if it just blows through, does less harm than swirling around inside breaking things. Always feelings touching feelings woven through out your words. Nice work. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
What ice said.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
every nomad needs a puff of wind now and then... very slick one helen.. very. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I saw this when it was first posted, and didn't reply just then....can't remember why, because it's a very moving piece -- and something that a guy can relate to in spite of the subject, having given that caress and knowing the import of it when it's real. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
yes, you left me breathless I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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