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Open Poetry #27

Give me something

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-06 07:38 PM

She says with no feeling
show me lust without thinking
give me want, never wanting
give me need
and need nothing

Give me you

give me something

Then she says
with no meaning
give me God
in a backrub
but dont stop
when you're finished

Give me you

give me something

And I say, with a purpose
here is me, you can have it
but I mean when I tell you

When you get me,
you get nothing

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-06-2003 08:04 PM).]

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

1 posted 2003-07-06 08:08 PM

wow. i liked it a lot.

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-07-06 08:15 PM

Jason, this was a great poem, every word of it.
"Nothing", is what you make of it ...for all you or I know, we could be everything to someone, somtime, someday....maybe!

Hold onto that thought, it can't hurt!!!

Take care, you~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-07-2003 01:23 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-07-06 10:13 PM

Jason . . .
Ok now you know this is an awesome write . . .
God I loved this
That last line I completely disagree with of course . . .

Had me skating here . . .
awesome job
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-07-07 01:19 AM

Excellant poem!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-07-07 01:21 AM

oh Jason! this IS emoting

well done, poet Jason

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

6 posted 2003-07-07 01:53 AM

good stuff.
joe

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-07-07 05:27 AM

wonderful write, I loved this!

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

8 posted 2003-07-07 04:00 PM

Nothing from some is more than gold from other's. Well penned as usual Darkling with
candor and clarity.

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