Open Poetry #27 |
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A Mother's Perception |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio ![]() |
A Mother’s Perception My darling son I always cry when I see you in pain. Even when you say, “I’m alright mama, I’m alright. As a small child you cried when I had a broken nail. The pain and tears were in your beautiful innocent eyes, your childlike love was touching me. This is why I cried my son; this is why I cried. As a young boy you had cuts and bruises, bones broken, nothing I could do, only keep on loving you. Your pain was my pain my darling son. This is why I cried my son; this is why I cried. As a young man you had a motorcycle accident. All I could see was a motorcycle crushed beneath a car. You lying in the street saying to me, I’m alright mother, I’m alright. This is why I cried my son; this is why I cried. A man in tender years, love lost never to return. You cried my son, you cried. As I held you tight- I cried my son, I cried for you my son, I cried. “You’ll be alright my son, you’ll be alright.” Bonnie J. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice bon bon,,, nice pic!!! A voice of honesty |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sigh* my mom's going through this right now for my brother. Well done indeed... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A man in tender years, love lost never to return. You cried my son, you cried. As I held you tight- I cried my son, I cried for you my son, I cried. “You’ll be alright my son, you’ll be alright.” Oh, this hurt, Bonnie...though I don't have a son, my brother went through a very painful divorce after thirty something years of marriage. He said he felt like he lost everything he had worked all those years for. ![]() It hurts to see someone you love hurt. Hugs to you both ![]() Ethel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Bonnie ~~ As a mother myself, I think we have all cried a million tears. A mother is a mother no matter what age her child. And no one can love so deeply. This was wonderful and I have added it to my library. Huggles, Marti |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you just brough tears to my eyes. That almost never happens, that poem was just so sad... I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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