inner child (thanks for inspiring me Karen)

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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

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0 posted 2003-07-06 01:18 AM

She's staring back at me
with those eyes
Baby blue's piercing through my dreams
Piercing through my soul
Grasping onto my heart
Cradling back and forth
In the dark recesses
Of my mind
I want to reach her
I want to hold her
I'm sorry
Baby I'm sorry
I never meant to hurt you
I never meant to make you cry
Let me hold you
Let me love you
Just please
Please...
forgive me
I love you
I never meant to bring you down
Never meant to have you believe
In the things I've said
They've said
I'm sorry I never protected you..
She's staring at me
with those eyes
Baby
Let me love you
While I try to love myself

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (07-06-2003 01:25 AM).]

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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1 posted 2003-07-06 01:33 AM

Agony in this, and you bring it out so strongly, with such burning passion....

The only proper response to this poem is to go back and read it again -- aloud.

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-07-06 01:36 AM

This is so poignant in your honesty--so brave to write yourself inside out--

Just hugs, dear lady.

you just floored me.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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3 posted 2003-07-06 02:03 AM

geez

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
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4 posted 2003-07-06 08:20 AM

Heart to heart dialogue with your inner child, powerful write.
May we never lose contact with our own innocence!
Very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
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5 posted 2003-07-06 03:00 PM

Kris . . . I applaud you
for standing bare before us all

The witchy one will make you work for your word LOL (kidding Karen I know you heard that)

This is just . . . cleansing
xxoo

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

6 posted 2003-07-06 03:04 PM

Thats beutifull. The saddnes is overwhelming

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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7 posted 2003-07-06 03:29 PM

Awesome kris awesome I apologize to mine nightly

Ishmael
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 51

8 posted 2003-07-06 07:05 PM

Very, very nice...

Now, keep her close.

Ish

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-07-06 09:08 PM

Very well done! We neglect our inner child more than we realize. I wonder why that is? Enjoyed. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

10 posted 2003-07-07 05:50 PM

thanks for the reminder. i think i need to have a talk with mine...it's been awhile. well done, Kris

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