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Open Poetry #27

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-05 09:24 PM

Her questing hands, had found him weak
his questing heart, had comfort seeked
and found a soul, his soul had seeked
she fouled his soul, his soul was weak

He fought with strength he did not have
and she applied an evil salve
It healed me and cut me in half
she sacrificed me like the calf

Not her fault, was mine, I know
am weak when gods decide to show
their power over me I know
But through their blood, I know I grow.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-07-05 09:43 PM

But through their blood, I know I grow.

hard price to pay,
good real good jason

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-07-05 10:19 PM

While I was reading this, I changed him to her and he to she, ....(that would be me)

Her questing hands, had found him weak
his questing heart, had comfort seeked
and found a soul, his soul had seeked
she fouled his soul, his soul was weak

so it goes, and so we grow!
Good stuff Jason~

IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

3 posted 2003-07-05 11:03 PM

Great write, I don't think anyone can deny that!

~*Summer*~

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