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Open Poetry #27

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-07-05 08:21 PM

time and time again

in seeking pen of wise men

a circle surrounds

***

cool evening breeze flows

heated thoughts tempered gently

silencing anger

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-05-2003 08:27 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-07-05 08:27 PM

Yes Kacy...the circle never ends~ Ok I'll do my usual edit....like the never ending circle, we learn to temper our thoughts....gently. (what can I say, I'm a slow learner) I loved your second senryu as much as the first one.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-05-2003 08:34 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-07-05 08:28 PM

Lori,

thanks, friend
I added a second one, and then discovered your reply.

Namaste, Peace, Happy Fourth and Fifth.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-07-05 08:33 PM

Dear Kacy, I love the wise thoughts your senryus express.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2003-07-05 08:48 PM

You're great at writing haiku, and I hope I hear more of it from you

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-07-05 08:52 PM

thanks Margherita and Miss Wind

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