Open Poetry #27 |
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alchemy (memories - accurate recall of love and lust?) |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now ![]() |
alchemy please stop and think a moment perhaps your dear memories are nothing but alchemy slowly transmuted into a mysterious new form of the love and lust recalled romanticizing bygone days with abundant feelings full of the warm and fuzzy in a desirous fashion often clouds reality events in the past can carve strong pathways in one's head leaving lasting passages influencing our thoughts and passions in the present we do not always realize that powerful memories with time become creative blendings of fact and fiction pleasant reminiscences images are alchemized by mixing experience with emotions bringing back jagged pieces of events which falsely highlight the whole So while our recollections feel absolute they are not because memory never captures life like a camera instead it simulates an impressionistic painting Please remember this Janette |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
we do not always realize that powerful memories with time become creative blendings of fact and fiction pleasant reminiscences Isn't that the truth!! So pretty in poetry you are, just like your picture Janette~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps...indeed...James |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
true karma very nice Janette |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We sure don't always remember it like it truly wasy..sure wish our memory did have a camera..I'd like to be able to go back and take another look at situations. Enjoyed this Janette. ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I enjoyed this beautiful and wise poem. The reference to an impressionistic painting is great. There are distortions of our memories, but evoking them in a special light can be really pleasant. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Yep you said it |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So very true, Janette...wise words! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh I like this!! And, how very true are these words. Wonderful write. Very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You know I love the insight you have into things and the way you explain it all in poetry. ![]() Good to see you in Open, my friend. ![]() enjoyed You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
BluesSeranade - Lady, you flatter me and I sure did enjoy it, too...hahahha THANK YOU! James Michael - hummm perhaps? Ahhhhhhh come on James, you know us romantics tend to paint our memories with dabs of our brushes rather than full strokes. hahaha Local Rebel - Thanks for the connect. Poet deVine - I agree with you, wish my memory was as sharp as a photograph, for it would save me much grief, I think. Thanks. Margherita - I was trying to be discerning. There are so many broken hearts here at Passions, and I certainly have been there done that, too, that I felt inspired to post this piece. Thanks Thomas - thanks Buddy for the read! Martie - not bad for a blonde huh? hahaha! Thank you for commenting, I do appreciate it. Enchantress - So glad that you liked this one, thanks for your reply. Temptress - Ahhhh ... what a dear message to leave me girl friend. Thanks |
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