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These Poems |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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These poems have lived, in crumbled papers stuffed down an already ample bra, in scratches and scribbles from assorted pens - both Bics and Cross, in lightbulbs that go off between telephone calls, they follow me in installments disjointed verbs and adjectives growing wings and feet chasing me down supermarket aisles, between hot sheets they've stopped the moment cold, winking at me before morning wake up calls, they feed and haunt me and beg for more, making me their marionnete seizing my voice at times, transforming a shy flowergirl into a naughty whore. These poems have lived, they are my truths that i would otherwise hide, tapping into some mysterious place i've kept secret from the world outside. inspired by sylvia plath's... stillborn [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-05-2003 01:14 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
yes the thoughts of a poem sometimes even disturb my sleep..and I say chucks...now I have to get up and scratch down those inspirations...nice one my transformed friend  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Brilliant write ..damn |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific thoughts expressed,,, A voice of honesty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write Michele! I know what ya mean! They get me too. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
on second thought, I don't think they've ever gotten me stopped in the moment between the hot sheets...nah...no thoughts of poetry there, only after |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Inspired...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ecrivan....glad you could relate thanks raf for the nice response q..as always a pleasure dixie........lol yes, you are right, maybe it just moved me so, who knows james.thanks for stopping by, glad u liked |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is so honest and so very you... LOL...I wanted to pick out a line to really honor...but they are all inseparable, and all fantastic. TD |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I don't know how many times I'm about to fall asleep. Wham here comes those words and I'm to lazy to get up. Then by morning they have left the house I can' t find them they are buried in the hidden corners of my mind. Thanks for sharing. Bon-Bon |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
These poems have lived, they are my truths that i would otherwise hide, tapping into some mysterious place i've kept secret from the world outside. So true, Michele........ (Now, I'm like Dixie about the "between the hot sheets") LOL Hugs  Ethel |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
Excelent write! You always do a wonderful job!! ~*Summer*~ [This message has been edited by IntoTheFlames (07-05-2003 10:10 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Your alter ego will have it's say. enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yep, they do that....well, maybe not the sheets part (picturing the scene "hold that pose, I've just got to write something down....")....at least not the hottest of hot sheets....I bow before your dedication to the art! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
diamond...i am glad you can find something here bonnie........glad to see you can relate and welcome here ethel.........glad to make you smile flames......welcome to pips, too seymour, always so nice to see your grace the page thanks, vandana...... rat.....yeah those hot sheets, dont know if i wrote this right........dont want anyone thinking im a cold fish....yeah right.....lol |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
what interesting places your muse travels  thank you sylvia! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nobody does it better! I love your inspiration and honesty Michele~ *applause* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele . . . mannnn DAMN Lady they chase me too this is your best I have seen since your return . . . amazing flow . . . and the punch . . . God http://www.plathonline.com/poems/Stillborn.html I included the link because I have never read her in such depth before . . . Yours is better . . . thank you xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Hello girl, good stuff you're writing, good stuff I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Another well written work. Its amazing where we can find our inspiration. Reading your stuff always stimulates me. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
lori, many thanks, and yes, h onesty gets me into trouble, but it's the only place i want to be. thanks rebel for reading wind, thanks for breezing by, girl sue, thanks for the link; her words truly speak to me and i look forward to the movie about her life coming out in the fall. bboy, what can i say , i'm a calming force and a stimulant, hope i dont wear you out too much [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-10-2003 06:28 AM).] |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wear me out....no not really....I just take matters into my own hands and use my imagination,,,,,, a wonderful thing, a vivid imagination |
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