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The Woman That Walked Away
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The Woman That Walked Away |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Woman That Walked Away She played the part that she loved me. She played the part that she cared. But ultimately she found a different role to play. She played the woman that pretended she loved me. She played the woman that walked away. JamesLee July04 2003 ABlastFrom MyPast. [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (07-05-2003 07:35 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - they seem to do crazy things like that... BC |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I feel sorry for you, do you need a shoulder to cry on? A Romantic Heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Bill and Romantic for the nice responses... Yes they do Bill, but I was forwarned...I just didn't want to believe it. Thank you Romantic...this was long ago on a cold dark night...at this point my main goal is to determine my part in this failed relationship so I can do better next time...I take some of the blame...and as I like to say...they don't always work out...James |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I liked this one. Next time ... choose a woman who is not an actress ... truth and sincerity are much much better, but then I have no need to tell you this for you already know. Dang! ... that hurts. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sad poem...very sad....wishing you good thoughts and happiness. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
know what James...just experienced the same thoughts...and you know something...people won't and don't always do as we'd like...or dream they would do...they can't live up to our expectations of how we think/believe things should be...doesn't make them bad people...they just were not able to love us as we'd have liked them to...doesn't make the hurt any easier, but might help you to understand and ease the pain some...but I don't and won't believe people set out to delibrately hurt us...and lest we forget, we were there to...hope this helps...hugs...lee j. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Love lost is painful for both male and female. When loves more than the other painful indeed. Sad poem. Glad you moving ahead. Bon-Bon |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, even though this is sad, you wrote it beautifully. I'm glad that you are learning from your past mistakes. That's what my Gary and I both are trying to do. Good luck to you, my friend.  Hugs  Ethel |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James,I have a guy just for her, they can walk away from eachother! Sandra |
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