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Love Story in 3 rictameters
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Love Story in 3 rictameters |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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~*~ Surprise Eyes made contact Our ears heard sweet hello's You gazed at me and I at you We exchanged words that both had longed to hear At this moment in time both knew You were for me always And I for you Surprise ~ Darling Open your heart Allow love to enter Receive my advance of passion Let us enjoy a lifetime of romance Together today and always Without you I'm nothing With you I'm all Darling ~ Honey The time is now Send the invitations And order your white gown and veil You the bride and me the groom so happy Together we will share each day Enjoying each as one Till death part us Honey ~*~ ~thanks Karilea for your help on my first try at rictameters~ QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (06-13-2003 02:48 PM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 BRAVO!!!! This is wonderful, Glenn, and you know that I love them. Hugs  Ethel P. S. You did them in perfect form. by the way!!  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-13-2003 02:42 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thank you ethel for your nice comments  QjQ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
oh happy day!!!!!!!! so sweet |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... I enjoyed this for its form and it tender.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Oh Glenn, i really enjoyed the way you put these three together. can we have more please? |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
My gracious, Q! I've been practicing this ricto stuff and hardly think that I can compete with THIS one! Three in a row, developing into the love story of the year! WOW! You're the "Ricto" (Or, is it "Ricta" ? Someone please correct me!!!) guy of the year! Blue Ribbon! THANKS for sharing this! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. [This message has been edited by JilGirl (06-14-2003 10:46 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
jilgirl you forgot to leave your address where do i send check? lol thanks for your comments QjQ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh this would be great for a wedding! loved how you displayed it! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love them all Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
good show...on your try, keep the ink flowing |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely! its like receding your vows lol ARCTIC WIND |
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