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One Year Ago
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One Year Ago |
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Aya Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 42New Zealand |
One year ago, I died One year ago, I grieved One year ago, I made you grieve One year ago, I lied One year ago, My life changed One year ago, I was foolish One year ago, I was alone One year ago, I pretended Many of you don't know what happened one year ago. Today my life is completely different because of the events that happened one year ago. For those that remember, I'm sorry. I never really meant it to happen, one year ago. There is no need to forgive... and maybe a year from now I will look back and be glad that I told the truth unlike what I did one year ago... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very interesting write, even though it was bit repetitive. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
we all have our mistakes to deal with, and sometimes repetition is a big part of life, we just have to move forward. Nice job. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mistakes are not something we choose to make, it's part of human nature, like it or lump it. I think the repetitive scheme suits your poem well. |
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