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Dance To God |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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something im working on but willing to show now just want to know if it will be a better poem when ive corrected it well i still hope its a ok poem now lol thanks for reading if you do read it _______________________________________________ Beautiful females dance to the night As their shadows are brought to life Through the fiery light burning bright Moving their bodies till morning light Praying to the gods in the skies above Eyes focused on heaven’s gates of love They chant all at once "God send us love" As it gathers and beams To the heavens above Instand of a voice Calling back to the crowd A heavenly angel is sent to the ground “your god sends you love and peace all around” [This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-13-2003 02:18 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Lee, I don't know about this one, it's kinda spooky, reminds me of a cult...dancing and chanting...not really my style |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
lol i don't write about just angels and love lol i got to write what i feel and i wanted to try this one i don't really like it much myself but ahhhhh its still a poem lol im currently writing a poem for littlewing about angels and sleep so ill post it soon ok and you can enjoy that instand of whatever ive tried to write above im not even sure why i wrote it lol my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I think its Cool ARCTIC WIND |
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