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Open Poetry #27

Pining Away (l0 or less)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-03 09:59 PM

why?

still?

because.........

you took me to heaven

every time

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-03-2003 10:00 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-03 10:06 PM

oh my! Wonderfully written, short and sweet!

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

2 posted 2003-07-03 10:27 PM

YES!!!! Well said!!! Applause!!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-07-03 10:30 PM

VERY, VERY good!!!

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~

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