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Open Poetry #27

I looked out...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-07-03 08:07 PM

finch with wings in "C's"
cooling his pits in the breeze
feathers fluttered calm

©July 3, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-03 08:20 PM

Hee! Great write! It's so hot outside..

Enjoyed

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-07-04 01:26 AM

LOL....wingpits...now there's an image!

An odd feeling, to laugh in the middle of a haiku, and still enjoy it as a serious poem...

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-04 02:06 AM

nice visual

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2003-07-04 02:23 AM

this is great, we have them, too! I'll have a good chuckle when I look at them in the a.m., thanks!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-07-04 11:45 AM

---ah, yes, I can see them!

Happy 4th Hugs,
EA

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-07-04 05:56 PM

VAS - hey, they just flew by me...

BC

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