Open Poetry #27 |
The Object Of My Affection |
SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
Words cannot express My feelings towards you You were once in my past And shall be in my future too Even though we stopped talking You never left my heart My friends told me to forget it But from you, I could not part As I thought of our many memories The way we laughed, the way I cried I remembered how close we were And how you were always on my side There¡¯s something about your smile That seems to touch my soul There¡¯s something about the way you cared That made you the other half to my whole There¡¯s something about the way you listened To every word I had to say You always had the right advice To brighten up my day Even though you stopped caring My heart would still believe That one day in the future Your love I would receive The other guys I¡¯ve liked Cannot compare to you You seem to make me feel special Not something every guy can do That¡¯s why I haven¡¯t stopped trying To reach my highest goal To see you and me together To make our halves one whole I hope you haven¡¯t stopped wondering If my love for you is real Cause there¡¯s a pain deep inside me That only your love can heal I guarantee our relationship Won¡¯t be like it was before I¡¯ll make our communication stronger If you promise to give me more To give me more love To have more compassion To give me what I¡¯ve been missing To help me cure my obsession Now I hope you can see That we have a connection So what can I call you But the object of my affection ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
WOW! This is like...uh...a...ummm...POEM! Yeah, that's it, a poem, with rhymes and meter and everything! *GRINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN* (just playing with you.) I loved it - - the looping through time of human connections; the emotions that need temporal space to grow. Good stuff! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of nice feelings here...James |
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