Open Poetry #27 |
To LOVE, Or Be IN LOVE........There Is A Difference |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Graphic From Annes Place ~0~ We hear a lot of couples saying as on their path of life I truly love my husband or I really love my wife As I was pondering the thought about this miracle called love This meeting of the hearts that so many speak of I wondered what the difference is in lives where the couples marriage succeeds How can love be kept alive so separate lives they never lead Part of the difference I see between the lives of the two Is the lasting ones seem to stay IN LOVE treating their love as if it were new Taking care each day their love to ever show Making sure of it the other never doubts and in their heart always know Putting each other first before their own desires Keeping alive the passion of their loves burning fires So from past mistakes we have learned for our love to stay alive We should love each other without reservation and for to stay IN LOVE to strive ~0~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-03-2003 09:09 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Beautiful truthful writing......thank you for the words... Goldenrose. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Goldenrose. I appreciate that. Hugs Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What true words here Ethel! Yes indeed..the trick to staying 'in love'. Much enjoyed! ~Morning smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"Putting each other first before their own desires" THIS is true love! If we learn to do this, our love will never fail... Excellent poem, Ethel. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ethel dear, this is beautiful. Your considerations are quite appropriate, I think. Love, Margherita |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely writting, I think it is different to love or be in love, both are great though Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"So from past mistakes we have learned for our love to stay alive We should love each other without reservation and for to stay IN LOVE to strive" so ture, so true...if only more people around me knew this as well... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful, heart felt wisdom. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on love...in many relationships it seems like only one of the party is doing most of the work...love is something that should be shared equally...these are the relationships that prosper...James |
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luckyme9293 Junior Member
since 2003-07-01
Posts 24tx |
very pretty i like the title |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
of course there is a major difference, after many years, complacency may set in and the love of a spouse is more like caring like you love your father or brother but to be IN LOVE is a whole other ballgame thats the trick |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
anyone can love,, "but it takes "TWO" to be "IN LOVE" A voice of honesty is treasured more than voices of flattery QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (07-03-2003 07:30 PM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
great writing... now, if I could only figure out HOW to stay in love, I'd be doing great hehe It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Ethel, that is just how I want to love my dream girl when I find her, I want to pretend each day is like the day I first fell in love and make her think "Hey, the spark has never subsided and I know he still loves me with all his heart, yay!" (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know you and Gary are truly IN LOVE, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Exactly! But it is really difficult when it only comes from one side of the equation. I am happy for you that: Ethel + Gary = Eternal Love EA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
garysgirl, I love the musings and the thoughts Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Simply beautiful poem. I always look forward to finding your poetry. Hugs, Deb |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You know the secret...you hold the key... then you shared it in your poetry. Wise words of heart lessons poetess Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Ethel, you do it over and over again...you touch my heart and make me smile |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy, thank you, sweet lady..... . El_Campeador, yes, if both would always do it, love would last. . Margherita, thank you very much. . Julie, yes both are great!! . . Thank you all for your sweet replies. I appreciate them all. Hugs to all of you Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
eor, yeah...doesn't work if only one of the couple does it. . Eric, thank you, Sir. . James, so true, my friend. Both have to want it to work...and then be willing to share what it takes to make it work. . luckyme, thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. . . I really appreciate all of you and thank you all for reading my poem. Hugs to you all Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, that's it....exactly what I mean. . Glenn, so true... . Rhonda, thank you. I hope you figure it out. LOL It's wonderful.... . Noah, that's it....keeping the love alive. . . Thank you all so very much. I appreciate you all. Hugs to all of you Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, I know....it takes two wanting their love to prosper. . Kethry, thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. . Deb, thank you. I really appreciate that!! . . Thank you all so very much. I appreciate ya'll. Hugs to everyone, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. . Janet Marie, thanks for the reply in verse. I love that!! . Dixie, I'm so glad!! Thank you. . . I thank you all very much and appreciate each of you. Hugs to all of you Ethel |
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