navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Stimulating Thoughts
Open Poetry #27
Post A Reply Post New Topic Stimulating Thoughts Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-06-11 12:13 PM


Stimulating Thoughts

I am waking up to reality,
its hands caressing me in warmth,
stimulating thought until
tomorrow has its way.

*

I am my own answering machine,
dictating the rules of the game,
guiding the words that will flatter my existence,
allowing cracks to form,
and the oozing to begin.

*

I've barely scratched the beauty of it all,
and when I awake on the other side,
I will know it was meant to be.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-11-2003 01:18 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-06-11 01:40 PM


Very beautiful stimulating thoughts!
Hope stretches into tomorrow.
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2003-06-11 01:54 PM


WynterGal~
I was thinking of taking a little nap ... but as I went to shut down ... you 'stimulating thoughts' struck me ... NOW, I'm too wide awake to snooze~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-06-11 02:03 PM


nicely done M...
may the waking indeed touch you tenderly

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-06-11 02:53 PM


Marge, I was supposed to be taking a little nap when the stimulating thoughts came to my mind

you are a funny gal and I like you that way
hugss
M

Margherita, thank you. Hope springs eternal or something like that *s

Ron, oh you know me, down in the dumps one minute, flying high the next. Today I am trying to be on an even keel.(whatever that means)


M

Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
5 posted 2003-06-11 08:42 PM


well, this stimulated my creativity. I just hope that by the time I finish reading tonight I get the chance to write. Lovely to read you.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
6 posted 2003-06-11 08:46 PM


fabulous write,,,,

QjQ

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
7 posted 2003-06-11 08:59 PM


Thank you, Jen..I hope you get to post one of your wonderful poems too.

hugss
M

Thanks Q

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
8 posted 2003-06-14 04:10 AM


good stuff M
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2008-02-01 05:12 PM


Beautifully Worded!

ARCTIC WIND

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #27 » Stimulating Thoughts

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary