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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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You shout my name I just don’t hear Your voice to me is like a whisper Your filthy lies don’t touch my mind The person you knew I hide inside Don’t you see my soul is bleeding? Can’t you hear my heart? Because it’s weeping You sit and laugh and watch my pain I’d just wish you’d feel the same You've played the cheaters before And if i take you back for more Id break my heart into the floor Scattered forever and ever more. [This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-13-2003 10:24 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I hate being lied to, but I could never wish the same pain on another..eventually it will ease... M |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know of this pain. My ex Greg cuased pain like this for me. I enjoyed the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I feel your anger and hurt in this one. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
painful write |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, this one definitely hurts. I hope things get better for you soon.  Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, it was not that long ago...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's a good venting write of heart pain. But for me, I've always found that my heart cannot heal unless I forgive before I move on. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed.... ARCTIC WIND |
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