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Open Poetry #27

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Bonfirelight
Member

since 2003-06-19

Posts 85
London, England

0 posted 2003-07-02 04:40 AM

Petrol fumes
and red balloons
wicked words set to loony tunes
hollow smiles
on pensive lips
behind the eyes the timebomb ticks

and soon

column after column advance
&
revelling masses
continue to dance

listening to speeches
praying with preachers
the words they chant bleach us
but who will be teachers?

we know it's whoever is left

and the white followed us all

[This message has been edited by Bonfirelight (07-02-2003 06:59 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-07-02 12:51 PM

BonFireLight~
I stopped by to welcome you to Passions~

Though I'm not sure I understand the intend of your piece, I enjoyed the marching cadence of your thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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