Open Poetry #27 |
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My Battle |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
My Battle Quiet moments quiet thoughts I go deep inside my head Searching for the inner me I wonder if she's dead. Digging...Prying facing the truth admitting to myself I'm not who I wanna be I wanna be somebody else! Laughing...Joking Boldly lying telling you to your face I never really needed you and put you in your place. Squirming...Sobbing Shrinking...Dying Hiding behind myself. Thinking of ways to take it all back and excuse it as needing help. quatro |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
can understand the sentiment here...well expressed ![]() [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-02-2003 12:17 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understand totally |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well we all need it...some of us get it. You showed the way. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write,,,, A voice of honesty |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A good write with lots of emotion felt. Hugs to you ![]() Ethel |
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