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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Adam It was a conscious decision to follow her suit not, it would seem a decision of conscience For he barely considered disdaining the fruit while knowing they’d taste the fruit of disdain [This message has been edited by wranx (07-01-2003 11:57 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes - conscious decisions - free will. God did give us all, didn't he? More, please? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
lol, Geez Sunshine! You'll find "Eve" already written here....somewhere. More?.....sheesh! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
When I was younger, my brother and I used to import/export small animals and reptiles...being the only single one, I had the pleasure of keeping all the snakes. I lived in this house that was split into four apartments. Next store were these to very lovely ladies that used to invite me over for dinner etc. frequently...we were just friends. One afternoon, one of the snakes had died. We were going to have a barbecue in the back yard under this little crabapple tree. I took the dead snake, draped it over one of the branches and figured I'd freak out the gals, be a big hero and take care of the snake. I draped it over a limb that one little apple at the end. The gals saw the snake, screamed and I went over to the tree and replied: "Hey look, the snake's dead and the apple's back, let's get out of these fig leaves and have a real barbecue. Now obviously, these ladies had not been reading their Bibles and didn't know the story of Adam and Eve and how they started wearing fig leaves to cover themselves after eating the fruit..so, needless to say this didn't work out well.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Typical man, he'll swallow anything a woman hands him...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
He said that - not me remember  Love the run you are on here Ed. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yes I'd like more too Ed.. p l e a s e |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Cain and Abel next? You make those old fictions interesting grins |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
me likes. yes, more please sir. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Can't get enough of your words...more please? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx It's the only game in town. LOL |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
Very interesting write. You think Adam wishes he had that day back? Amazing how one action can cause such tremendous ripples in time. I wrote a poem on this topic in open poetry #26, called Adam's Fall. Check it out if your interested. Good stuff. Joe |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I'm voting with Raph, for a Cain and Abel write.How about it Ed? Jason |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See? Seems like everyone thinks that "more" is good...  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very good, Wranx! Concise, yet full of meaning. Corinne |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed: freewill indeed curse of the soul yet the only way to live I want to see you write about the snake's perception . . . heh . . hehe xxoo |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Wranx...Enjoyed your twist on words...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I don't get to reply as often as I get to read. I'm always out here somewhere. Nodding my head at this one....wishing I had your touch with the words. Late at night you'll come crawling back |
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