Open Poetry #27 |
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The Door |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown ![]() |
~ By Sue ~ Will there ever be A love so sweet as what he gave Or will I be too afraid To even let it stay If it should one day come I think about this thing called love And all of the pain it brought I think I have had, more than enough I tried it once or maybe twice All I got was a broken heart One that will never mend Even though we are apart The door to my heart is closed I can't let anyone too close 6-30-03 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
The door to my heart is closed I can't let anyone too close oh please bella let your door remain open ....if not for the sunlight ![]() a very nice but sad write.. Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
ahh..but it is not up to us to close and open the doors to our hearts. ![]() Lovely thinking.. "You put a stain on all of my good days." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep. I know it too |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
But I do hope that one day your curiosity gets the best of you, and you crack that door open, just a tiny bit....enough to let new feelings take the place of the old pain! Great write, Sue, and keep working on that door, ok? ![]() Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think once you've been hurt it's perfectly normal to leave that door closed for awhile, the trick is to figure out when to open it again at the right time...James |
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paladin![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
You hold the key to that door.Don't become your own warden. paladin |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
All I got was a broken heart One that will never mend Sue, oh I beg to differ. Your heart IS on the mend. It is just going through a healing period right now. I think that you gained many positive things through this "life lesson." Hang in there kiddo. hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think the door is hinged to swing Sue...when the time is right... hugs M |
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luckyme9293 Junior Member
since 2003-07-01
Posts 24tx |
Very sad hunny, but i knw that feeling. Leave the door open, You never no, Something good may come knocking. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Never say never! Life has a way of surprising us! ![]() Loveya! Linda |
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