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Open Poetry #27

Serenade Of Silence

altoladybj
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since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-07-01 12:15 PM

When the tendrils of night have vanquished day,
allowing moon and stars to flaunt their display,
The wind awakening invokes a breeze,
that slow dances softly through the trees.
Ghost mountains rise to embrace the sky,
echoes of sadness in the whippoorwill's cry,
A shooting star traversing time and space,
hurtling through the heavens in a fiery race.
A serenade of silence lulls the world to sleep,
as angels hover near, love's vigil to keep.

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-07-01 12:19 PM

Your observances have filled your senses. I know the feeling. Thanks for sharing.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-07-01 12:29 PM

very nicely done
Welcome to Passions!

She
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since 2002-11-29

Posts 41
Wishing On A Northern Star

3 posted 2003-07-01 03:20 AM

beautiful..
peaceful..
enjoyed

"You put a stain on all of my good days."
Matchbox Twenty "Disease"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-01 03:56 AM

very beautiful

Cruina
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since 2003-07-01

Posts 16
Virginia

5 posted 2003-07-01 03:58 AM

odd choice of words, but i liked it. "Vanquished" especially. I don't typically like rhyming poetry but this was very well done. Definetely sets a mood.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-07-01 09:48 AM

Welcome to Passions. I'm going to enjoy reading your poetry.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2003-07-01 01:21 PM

Kahlil,
Thanks for the read, always appreciated.

Midnitesun,
Thanks for the kind comment and the welcome.

She,
Your comments are deeply appreciated. Glad you enjoyed.

passing shadows,
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

Cruina,
Glad you enjoyed my odd choice of words. Appreciate the read.

Sunshine,
Thanks for the welcome and I hope you continue to enjoy my poetry.

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