When You Pass Me In The Hall

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quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

0 posted 2003-06-30 06:12 PM

When you pass me in the hall
do you see my face at all?
Do you try hard not to touch?
Does it really hurt that much?

With every day that leaves us behind
I fight the tears that's left me blind.
Blind to the sight of loosing you
Blind to the past and hidden truth.

The love we shared I thought was real
and all the false senses you made me feel.
Where the sun once rose there is no more
no longer does the eagle soar.

When you pass me in the hall
do you see my face at all?
The silence we share between us two
is louder than the memory of you.

When you pass me in the hall
Do you see my face at all?

quatro

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-30 06:15 PM

very touching write,,,

i enjoyed reading...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2003-06-30 06:33 PM

"When you pass me in the hall
do you see my face at all?
The silence we share between us two
is louder than the memory of you."

Great verse quatro!

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-06-30 07:04 PM

it hurts to be treated that way: a lovly write.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

4 posted 2003-06-30 07:13 PM

How sad Quatro

Wonderful write

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-01 12:48 PM

sad but good, thanks for the memory there

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-07-01 01:32 PM

Reminds me of relationships gone bad...and makes one think...if they were telling the truth how can they just walk away from me...it seems like I would always be at least something to them...unless they were not telling the truth from the beginning...James

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

7 posted 2003-07-01 11:21 PM

Thank you QjQ, Duncan, Wind, Timothy & PS;

It's always nice to hear from you.

James,

It is sad when one is in a relationship that is expected to be based on truth then suddenly it all ends and there is nothing left to hold on to. I have always come out of a realtionship with more then I had going in. I bring back with me the piece of "him" that I loved. I always wondered what part of me lingers on in them...if any.

Thank you.
quatro

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