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Thoughts About Nothing At All. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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Drip...drip...drip water falls from my bedroom ceiling but i barely hear it barely notice my mind is like a chattering monkey my eyes although shut they see everything my lips are cracked and dry from to many words spoken the tips of my fingers are sore and worn my feet although sturdy and strong would crumble at the thought of danger the monkey in my head slowy fades my sense's slowly dull i fall into my,oh so breif,blissfull sleep... ...so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you... [This message has been edited by exhale (06-30-2003 05:43 PM).] |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
I love the way you describe your thoughts as a "chattering monkey" Great write!! |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
ello exhale, thought I'd face some of your reality, but came up with insanity instead. LOL, we all feel like this sometimes. Good job my friend. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
after a few drinks, this is me too |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You described this very well. LOL at Dixie. Hugs to you  Ethel |
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