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Open Poetry #27

Wooden Heart

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-30 05:17 PM

My wooden heart could
create motion, from string
and puppeteer.

Force fed the ideals,
yet still hungering for my words.
I expand,
contrast,
my emotions as they are do not
plea for a reason, in which I
need..
To feel it,
touch what sky that imprisons me.
While seeing the world
from behind my eyes, the tears
have blurred my vision.

Caress the heart that
burns to ash..

And insane cloud that hovers just above..
Striving..
Wishing,
to be freed.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-30 05:21 PM

very nice write,,
i enjoyed reading...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-06-30 06:52 PM

awesome

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-06-30 06:55 PM

Sometimes we struggle in our lives, and
hopefully we learn from these struggles,
and can escape the bonds that bind us.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-01 02:39 PM

I feel this

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2003-07-01 02:45 PM

A powerful, poignant write....GAWD I relate and deem this a keeper!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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