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Everyone help me with this.....POEM CHAIN
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Everyone help me with this.....POEM CHAIN |
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Gavin Junior Member
since 2003-06-22
Posts 47 |
make a four lined poem and rhyme your first line with the last line of the post above you, rhyme scheme and sublect matter don't have to be the same but if they are that's ok too here comes the sun there goes the moon another month another june perhaps the sky will bring some water because i don't want drought to take my father *remeber my last line with your first and then people can go from your post and so on and so fourth, etc. etc. etc. just keep it going* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
here comes the sun there goes the moon another month another june perhaps the sky will bring some water because i don't want drought to take my father in stillness, I listen to another converstaion with self, soft banter thoughts spoken in gesture a language rich, in texture |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what rhymes with texture? Susan! Gosh! |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
I was waiting for someone to come up with that one also  quatro |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
to teach is not to lecture all you can do is give and hope the intended receiver is listening with an open mind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sorry...still thinking |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
here comes the sun there goes the moon another month another june perhaps the sky will bring some water because i don't want drought to take my father in stillness, I listen to another converstaion with self, soft banter thoughts spoken in gesture a language rich, in texture to teach is not to lecture all you can do is give and hope the intended receiver is listening with an open mind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
here comes the sun there goes the moon another month another june perhaps the sky will bring some water because i don't want drought to take my father in stillness, I listen to another converstaion with self, soft banter thoughts spoken in gesture a language rich, in texture to teach is not to lecture all you can do is give and hope the intended receiver is listening with an open mind but some walk hopelessly blind so I'm forced to find my way drifting on through seasons passing by another day [This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-30-2003 01:41 AM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
An open mind, I bring no other and seeking truth, I ask my brother "have you found truth, within your lover?" "no I found lies, go ask our mother" |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
here comes the sun there goes the moon another month another june perhaps the sky will bring some water because i don't want drought to take my father An open mind, I bring no other and seeking truth, I ask my brother "have you found truth, within your lover?" "no I found lies, go ask our mother" in stillness, I listen to another converstaion with self, soft banter thoughts spoken in gesture a language rich, in texture to teach is not to lecture all you can do is give and hope the intended receiver is listening with an open mind but some walk hopelessly blind so I'm forced to find my way drifting on through seasons passing by another day |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
here comes the sun there goes the moon another month another june perhaps the sky will bring some water because i don't want drought to take my father in stillness, I listen to another converstaion with self, soft banter thoughts spoken in gesture a language rich, in texture to teach is not to lecture all you can do is give and hope the intended receiver is listening with an open mind but some walk hopelessly blind so I'm forced to find my way drifting on through seasons passing by another day the lesson has lead me astray leaving me alone in the dark the night has turned to winter and the cold freezes my heart. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Awesome Sea! Jason [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (06-30-2003 01:49 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
.....good job Susan! That worked out great~ [This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-30-2003 01:49 AM).] |
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Gavin Junior Member
since 2003-06-22
Posts 47 |
you guys don't have to copy down the whole poem just your four lines and if you have to compliment make it after a four lined poem that you've written so it looks like one long poem and it'll be really cool |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
great job! keep it going! quatro [This message has been edited by quatro (06-30-2003 01:54 AM).] |
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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
but love is like art shifting in each motion washing over itself like shadows in the dark |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
as i'm passing by the dogs bark to find my way to you my love to cuddle and set by the fireplace sipping wine and gazing into the fire A voice of honesty is treasured more than voices of flattery QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (06-30-2003 02:17 AM).] |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Well, I read everything before me and now I have gone numb from the neck up...you guys are great, I think I will sleep on this one and bring it back tomorrow night! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Of our love I will never tire for alive it will always stay The two of us will be together for forever and a day [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-30-2003 05:08 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"But what of love," I heard you pray "will it last, a forever's day?" Then calmed by the sight of seeing you, I wrote some poetry out of the blue. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
When I took that glimpse of you, At once I knew that more was due! That forever is far too brief, Our love is way beyond belief! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Comes now to me this sweet relief when all shall be relieved of stress... when father and son, again, renew and each will have passed the other's test. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the stage’s set in love’s motif my heart‘s stolen and you play thief! the drum rolls and the stream flows as the sun glows in bright halo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
oops... didn't see Karilea's post... well, whoever follows has a choice regards sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (06-30-2003 09:06 AM).] |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
But farther into life we must go, And inspite of our love, I confess, That at times I have my doubts, But life is still worth living out! |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I tried to tie both of yours in... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So bear in mind this silent shout! I leave for love and love you still 'tis growth of mind that thoughts entwine and blood's red will that gives us thrill. [and a mighty fine job you did, EC....] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A late comer to the sunshine, into the water Tough acts behind, days bright to find A poet's heart meld to combine, and never reached until For here we join to surf the sea as creamy centers spill |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I fear my heart has grown ill, for at night I wait with chill, as the sun comes and the moon flees, And I stare out to stormy seas. |
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Gavin Junior Member
since 2003-06-22
Posts 47 |
visions come as nighmares flee its obvious but not to me why we want and what we need but in the end life's left to greed *i think its ok to double post now, and i think you can only post every page, so if you 've done it once on a previous page its ok to do it again, like me* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You mean a member can only come in once? Nah...that's not how we do it.  Double posting means not to post the same poem twice in any currently open forum.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Greed in life we do not need For it will unhappiness breed And if upon this we feed Hate will be planted as a seed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the wounded heart shall always bleed upon blue pages for all to read and here shall find companionship understanding, great friendship |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
bump! (ya got to keep it going...) |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
These friends help to equip Giving us a stronger grip On the truth of friendship, Helping us to understand The love found in a reaching hand! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As reaching out across the land Offering to others a helpful hand The poets gather on pages of blue In circles of love with friendship true [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-02-2003 11:30 PM).] |
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MissKlarmic Member
since 2003-02-20
Posts 70Canada,N.S |
This is what its all about The work,the love,the fun If you could only turn and see Its only just begun |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
but lets not shun one another under this great big sun life is only but a pluck on a violin because we are only but each others kin "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Be upbeat ~ put on a grin Open your heart ~ let friendship in Write a poem that starts a chain There's nothing to lose ~ much to gain |
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Canon_D_111 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 58New York USA |
this is really cool I will have to think about it.... [This message has been edited by Canon_D_111 (07-03-2003 01:31 PM).] |
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