more insane thoughts........or whatever

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Open Poetry #27

more insane thoughts........or whatever

Gavin
Junior Member

since 2003-06-22

Posts 47

0 posted 2003-06-30 12:47 PM

I am self destruction
i am last connected
i broke lest obstruction
i am vast disected

broken wings from a broken back
a broken dream to come to facts
with a god obseen that loves to lack
make way for greed here comes the axe

just of all and once were true
here comes the end the end ensue
to find whats wrong and to find the blue
the waters many but the oceans few

overrun and over fled
face not whats there but face whats said
problems are conclusions and visions are insane
this problem is its own solution so let it go unnamed

take back from what you want to will
and ask not once but twice to fill
come back through me and ask for thrill
let it go don't live through pills

because in the ends of beginings burst
run from quench and breathe to thirst
for in the end we all traverse
what's the end of begin reverse

so take what you want and want what you will
glue these wings from back to front
and swallow every pill
back up the ladder with waters thrill
back to front and off to fill
the empty man will peices grand
and lieing in the soaking sand
of the oceans bottom long unclaimed
this few of many and so becoming tamed

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-06-30 01:05 AM

overrun and over fled
face not whats there but face whats said
problems are conclusions and visions are insane
this problem is its own solution so let it go unnamed

Oh yea, what a pleasure this is to come across, loved that verse with no name.

Thank you, and welcome to Passions Gavin~

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-06-30 04:38 AM

so take what you want and want what you will
glue these wings from back to front
and swallow every pill
back up the ladder with waters thrill
back to front and off to fill
the empty man will peices grand
and lieing in the soaking sand
of the oceans bottom long unclaimed
this few of many and so becoming tamed
I really enjoyed that...
Great write!

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