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decorations and abominations |
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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
this ones about the rats who ate my alfredo sauce the gourmet kind that I work an extra 2 hours a week to purchase how do I know it was rats you dare ask? do I seem like someone who doesn’t know his rodents? I keep a plastic hula girl on my toilet tank she has those jesus eyes that always seem to be watching no matter where you are standing just like the photo of my lover she watches me to make sure I don’t misspell her name and that I don’t forget my chastity belt when I head out in the morning but when I get outside and a grip of orange carpets roll off the tongue of the sun she doesn’t really stand a chance how could she? I couldn’t of conceived a light more blinding than her own (know that you were beaten by a worthy adversary) somehow that equates to a pleasantry I was just taking the long way around [This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (06-13-2003 03:45 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*laughing at the hula girl with jesus eyes* love the ending of this Drexter, fabulous writing! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hello? anybody out there? this is good stuff! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed,,,, |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I sure enjoy the recesses of your mind and the fact that you're willing to pull the stuff out of your hat for us....I look forward to every write, and thank you. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Passing Shadows lol....  ARCTIC WIND |
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