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My Dilemma
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My Dilemma |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
My Dilemma They ask me if I love you I cannot tell a lie I can't hide these feelings or the sparkle in my eye. I don't know if to reveal the situation I am in Will I be cheating you just to satisfy my whim? Should I just keep quiet not let my feelings show take the risk of not knowing if our love could ever grow. If I decide to tell you what would happen then? Would you feel the same for me Or would our friendship end? What a crime love can be what a shame it sometimes ends. Love has no right at all stealing from a friend. quatro |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God Naome! oh my...what an ending here! you sure got me thinking hard now...that's a good thing...amazing write [This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-30-2003 12:56 AM).] |
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confusedwriter03 New Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 9U-S-A! haha |
thank you so much! great poem and like food does...it hit the spot!  keep on writing im ready for more. thanks again. ~*~Krista~*~ |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Passing, I'm always glad to see you and I'm glad that you liked this. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. quatro Confused, Thanks for stopping by and for your kind words. Always happy to have you. quatro |
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camman New Member
since 2003-06-30
Posts 7Spokane WA |
"Love has no right at all stealing from a friend." I love this line, oh the times I've been in that situation....! |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
 Well now, that one gets you to thinking don't it? Great write Quatro |
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